Explanation, Appreciation, Overview

'Beloved' poem - Explanation

                  It took 2 hours of joyous time to complete this poetry. Since, it is my first experience of writing poetry, I had a great pleasure while composing this romantic poem. The poem is based on an adolescent boy's lady love. He admires and personifies his girl's beauty. 

                  Everybody has a crush during their adolescence. Though the lover knows that his girls wants only his friendship, he is afraid to propose his love. So the boy tries to make up his mind but his heart is not willing to do so. 

Appreciation

'I could feel the warmth within me, If hotness hails near me'

The word 'warmth' has two meanings that one is  temperature and the other is pleasure. 'Hotness' decribes the ladylove and it can also be compared to the temperature. So these lines potrays that the boy could feel pleasure when the ladylove comes near him. 'hails' refers to freezing rain which comes occasionally and it comes from the sky where do God live. So, the ladylove is portrayed as God in this context.

'I'll whip the west to rise the sun, If you think it is fun'

'w'hip, 'w'est are in alliteration. 'sun' and 'fun' are the rhyming words. These are hyperbolic lines. The lover can even make the sun to rise in the west if his ladylove like it. This shows the boy is passionate towards his lady love.

Rhyme scheme : aabb.

'The december's dream came true, When I first encountered you'

'd'ecember's 'd'ream are in alliteration and also december is personified as it wished to make the ladylove to meet the lover. 'true' and 'you' are the rhyming words.

'I rubbed my eyes to gaze the beauty, Where my mind relinquished tranquility'

The boy was surprised by seeing his ladylove. The boy's mind was calm before seeing her. As soon as he saw her, he lost his patience. 'beauty' and 'tranquility' are the rhyming words.

Rhyme scheme: aabb.

'Her coloured hair and complexion fair, Is as soft as her heart'

The hair and skin of the ladylove is soft in nature. Her heart is personified as soft which means she is kind hearted. The external and internal beauty of the ladylove is compared using 'simile'.

'Those killing eyes and spicy voice, makes me to rejoice'

He potrays the eyes and voice of his ladylove. 'spicy' means interesting. The boys becomes joyous when he see his ladylove. 'voice' and 'rejoice' are the rhyming words.

'My mind seeks for your friendship, but heart hustles for love'

For his girl's happiness, he makes up his mind to develop friendship with her, but his heart wants to make love. 'h'eart 'h'ustles are in alliteration and also personified.

'I know that, that yours' is adolescent, But heart is always innocent'

"yours'" should not been misunderstood as the ladylove. It describes the lover whose heart belongs to the ladylove. The boy knows that his mind and heart thinks differently. He also knew that it is because of his adolescence. But his heart is innocent to differentiate his love and friendship. 'adolescent' and 'innocent' are the rhyming words.

Overview

Some of the incidents happened in my life is described in the poem with 'Romanticism'. I would like to thank my 'beloved' for making me to write this poetry. I would also like to thank my sister for her wonderful reply,

"Shakespearean era is far behind

 True innocence is too rare to find

 Wishful dream can indeed turn real

 When you think more than what you feel.

 May the beauty that glazed your adolescent eyes

 And became your beloved overnight

 Touch your senses but talk to your mind

 Your heart shall wait for love is blind."